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I think you did a really good job organizing and formatting this page. Under the career section, I feel like the last sentence was not incorporated really well. You talk about her views and then say she lives and works in London. I would either state it earlier or incorporated it a little better instead of just stating she lives and works there. Under the partial filmography section, you don't need to say "Her films include", the section header already tells the reader that these specific films involve Lis Rhodes. Overall, you did a great job and stated interested information about Lis Rhodes.Tingflorance (talk) 19:47, 13 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]