Talk:Lily Hope

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Evill029. Peer reviewers: Marielatapia126.

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Dear Evill029,

       Your Wikipedia page really did educate me regrading the Native Artist Lily Hope. You're research illustrates the basics of her life and what she does. You also do a really great job of explaining her artworks. Although your page has really great aspects to it, there are some things that can benefit from revisiting. First you should use in text citations to indicate where you got your information. Add footers to where you used the information that you got. By adding these in text citations, it strengths your arguments as well as gives the audience a chance to see where this information was retrieved from. It also makes your page more legit. Another thing that can benefit from a revisiting would be the section with her Artworks. To make this section stronger, you add the goals and meaning the author intended with the particular piece. I suggested you could refer to the handout that was provided by Professor Strathman to make sure your wikipedia article contains each criteria that was assigned to us. One more thing that can benefit from revising maybe adding more information about Lily Hope, by adding more information about her this page more legit because of all of the amount of research. I also suggest maybe proofreading this page.

       Overall your wikipedia page does a great job of getting the basic information down. By revising this article you're article will be much stronger! Best of luck in the revising stage. Happy writing!

Your Classmate, Marielatapia126 (talk) 01:02, 25 February 2020 (UTC) Mariela Tapia[reply]