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Bad english

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This page features malformed phrases and bad syntax. I will try to correct it, if I have time.

Help would be appreciated.

Lordmick 17:31, 26 February 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lordmick (talkcontribs)

I tried to help a little. Still a lot of work to be done to fix this one. DaffyBridge (talk) 00:51, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Relationship with Wei Yuan

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The section, 'Relationship with Wei Yuan', seems very out of place. It doesn't seem to fit in the article at all, let alone under a section titled 'Victories'. I'm going take the sentence in that section and move it to the lead. DaffyBridge (talk) 00:49, 9 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit

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I have attempted to repair the english in this article, I have read some other references to try and piece together what the original editor was trying to say, it still requires cites throughout, but at least it's readable now. --Despayre (talk) 22:05, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]