Talk:Leviathan Falls

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Plot Summary too long template

I was editing down an open source summary when this template was added. When I finished editing I had reduced the summary by ~68%. I will let others decide if it is now concise enough. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Duke Gilmore (talk • contribs) 13:28, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for adding a plot summary. I think it is still too long and lots of details can be omitted; see Nemesis Games for a plot summary of suitable length. intforce (talk) 17:58, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Amos Is Not Prone to Convincing

Following the dual dive, Amos convinces Elvi to cease the dives with Cara for ethical reasons.

I wouldn't say that Amos convinces Elvi of anything. He merely explains that Elvi's lifespan will be greatly enhanced if she ceases the dives. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.123.145.214 (talk) 14:20, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Inconsistent Camel Case

Certain phrases are inconsistently capitalized. For example, both Slow Zone and slow zone appear. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.123.145.214 (talk) 14:32, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The ebook consistently spells it lowercase. I've changed the three cases in the article that used uppercase. -- Finlay McWalter··–·Talk 17:04, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]