Talk:Lazar the Serb

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Review: July 15, 2013. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Lazar the Serb appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 31 March 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that a Serbian monk named Lazar built the first mechanical clock in Russia in 1404, one of the first in Europe, at the request of Vasily I of Moscow?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2013/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Lazar the Serb.

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Erecting the Clock on the Territory of Grand Prince’s Palace (Miniature)

.--Zoupan 13:39, 20 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Lazar the Serb/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 23 editor (talk · contribs) 20:07, 4 July 2013 (UTC) I'll get to this shortly.[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:
~~The ISBN on the Gordana Tošić and Milutin Tadić ref needs fixing~~

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
~~What does Isidore the Russian monk who invented vodka have to do with the content of the article? If nothing, then he should be removed from the "See also" section.~~
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: On hold

Nominator comment: All Fixed. I thought Isidore was relevant as he too was an inventor, in Moscow, not long after Lazar.--Zoupan 14:14, 14 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout at "See also"–"the links in the 'See also' section should be relevant, should reflect the links that would be present in a comprehensive article on the topic, and should be limited to a reasonable number." Besides that, everything seems fine. Passed. Good job. 23 editor (talk) 09:48, 15 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]