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I have reclassed this article to start class, as it now contains more info. mark999 14:40 27/07/07 UTC

Orphaned references in Lawrence Hill railway station

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Lawrence Hill railway station's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Oakley":

From Bristol to Exeter Line: Oakley, Mike (2006). Somerset Railway Stations. Bristol: Redcliffe Press. pp. not cited. ISBN 1-904537-54-5.
From Bristol Parkway railway station: Oakley, Mike (2003). Gloucestershire Railway Stations. Wimbourne, Dorset: The Dovecote Press. pp. 29–30. ISBN 1-904349-24-2.
From Bristol Temple Meads railway station: Oakley, Mike (2002). Bristol Railway Stations 1840–2005. Wimbourne: The Dovecote Press. ISBN 1-904349-09-9.
From Shirehampton railway station: Mike Oakley (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840-2005. Redcliffe. pp. 103–106. ISBN 1-904537-54-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Bristol Port Railway and Pier: Mike Oakley (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840–2005. Redcliffe. ISBN 1-904537-54-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Taunton railway station: Oakley, Mike (2006). Somerset Railway Stations. Bristol: Redcliffe Press. ISBN 1-904537-54-5.
From Redland railway station: Oakley, Mike (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840–2005. Redcliffe Press. ISBN 1-904537-54-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Henbury railway station: Oakley, Mike (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840-2005. Redcliffe. pp. ^{&#91, page needed&#93,}. ISBN 978-1-904537-54-0.
From Hotwells Halt railway station: Mike Oakley (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840-2005. Redcliffe. p. 79. ISBN 1-904537-54-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Long Ashton railway station: Oakley, Mike (2002). Somerset Railway Stations. Bristol: Redcliffe. ISBN 1-90453-754-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Avonmouth railway station: Mike Oakley (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840-2005. Redcliffe. pp. 42–44. ISBN 1-904537-54-5. {{cite book}}: External link in |publisher= (help)
From Saltford railway station: Oakley, Mike (2006). Somerset Railway Stations. Bristol: Redcliffe Press. p. 104. ISBN 1-904537-54-5.
From Nailsea and Backwell railway station: Oakley, Mike (2002). Somerset Railway Stations. Bristol: Redcliffe Press. ISBN 1-904537-54-5.
From Worle railway station: Oakley, Mike (2002). Somerset Railway Stations. Wimbourne: Redcliffe Press. ISBN 1-904349-09-9.
From Winterbourne railway station: Oakley, Mike (2006). Bristol Railway Stations 1840-2005. Redcliffe. pp. 150–151. ISBN 978-1-904537-54-0.
From Filton Abbey Wood railway station: Oakley, Mike (2003). Gloucestershire Railway Stations. Wimbourne, Dorset: The Dovecote Press. pp. 8–10, 69–71. ISBN 1-904349-24-2.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 16:07, 2 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead emphasis?

Would this be better as "Cross Country Route and Severn Beach Line", with possible related changes to follow?

My point is that Lawrence Hill exists, and still exists, because of its importance on the major route from Bristol to the major inter-city network via Parkway. Even if the majority of trains through it don't stop, it's an important route through an otherwise unimportant station stop for local traffic. The Cross Country Route should thus appear before the Severn Beach Line. Andy Dingley (talk) 03:25, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

There wasn't any particular reason I wrote it that way round, it just came out that way - feel free to change it. -mattbuck (Talk) 08:59, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cirt (talk · contribs) 06:13, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article. — Cirt (talk) 06:13, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

File:Lawrence Hill station geograph-2913053-by-Ben-Brooksbank.jpg = image hosted on Commons, appropriately licensed and attributed. Y.
File:Lawrence Hill Station Bristol at night (1964).jpg = image from Flickr, hosted on Commons, appropriately reviewed at Commons. Y.
File:121135 at Lawrence Hill.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:Lawrence Hill Station, 1979.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:Railway line view to Lawrence Hill 2012 - Flickr - Greater Bristol Metro Rail.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:Lawrence Hill Station Bristol 2000.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:67002 Lawrence Hill Station, Bristol 2000.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:Lawrence Hill Station in the snow.jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:Hugh llewelyn 153 305 (6702959723).jpg = flickr image, appropriately reviewed on Commons. Y.
File:170433 at Edinburgh Waverley.JPG = original image from Commons, checks out okay. Y.

— Cirt (talk) 06:23, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your listing of the Edinburgh Waverley image confused me - it took me a while to find where on the page that was! -mattbuck (Talk) 15:49, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Heh, no worries, — Cirt (talk) 15:50, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Stability review

Upon inspection of article edit history going back over six months, no glaring issues. Y.
Looked at talk page edit history and present version of talk page. No outstanding issues. Only polite discussion observed. Y.

— Cirt (talk) 06:25, 22 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review tabulation

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Wording is indeed clear and succinct throughout.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Good layout and style presentation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	Proper use of references for information provided.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	Nice use of in-line citations to WP:RS sources, standardized citation style is excellent.
	2c. it contains no original research.	No problems here.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Major aspects addressed appropriately.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	No issues here.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Neutral presentation throughout, with matter of fact wording given.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	Passes here, see above.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	Passes here, see above.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	Passes here, see above.
	7. Overall assessment.	Great job overall!

Thankyou kindly. -mattbuck (Talk) 09:26, 23 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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