Talk:Lady Gaga and the Muppets Holiday Spectacular/GA1
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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
Move the periods inside of the quotation marks, so instead of this ". it becomes this ."
Do the same with the commas.
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. |
@IndianBio: Just making sure you saw this page! ---Another Believer (Talk) 22:04, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Another Believer: thanks a lot, no I have somehow missed it with the hoopla around the Super Bowl pages haha. —IB [ Poke ] 05:14, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
- No worries! Seemed uncharacteristic for you not respond immediately. :) Good luck! ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:15, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
- @IndianBio: Timetable for this? Kees08 (talk) 05:12, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Kees08: I have made corrections to the article and replied to you wherever I felt it was not necessary. I thank you immensely for your patience. —IB [ Poke ] 17:11, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
- @IndianBio: Question on the quotation marks and punctuation issue. I have looked up several websites that have said the period is always inside the quotation mark. Do you have anything that shows otherwise? Kees08 (talk) 07:35, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Kees08: check the Manual of Style here at MOS:SINGLE for Punctuation before quotations in the example Caitlyn Jenner expressed concerns about children "who are coming to terms with being true to who they are". Here the quotations are before the period since it is not a complete sentence or a quote, rather a part of it. I have seen this being followed across all the FA articles I have read through or their FACs also. —IB [ Poke ] 08:30, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- That is silly that they go with British English in lieu of American English in this specific instance but not in others. No idea why you wouldn't write towards the audience. Regardless, not my or your problem to worry about. Kees08 (talk) 07:15, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
- Kees08, see MOS:LQ—Wikipedia deliberately uses logical quotation style in everything, just as it uses double quotation marks rather than single, and non-curly ones at that. It isn't American vs. British, it's what makes logical sense, by not inserting punctuation where it hadn't existed in the original material. That's one of the American punctuation rules that make little sense to most Americans, so I'm perfectly content that Wikipedia doesn't use it. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:33, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
- That is silly that they go with British English in lieu of American English in this specific instance but not in others. No idea why you wouldn't write towards the audience. Regardless, not my or your problem to worry about. Kees08 (talk) 07:15, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Kees08: check the Manual of Style here at MOS:SINGLE for Punctuation before quotations in the example Caitlyn Jenner expressed concerns about children "who are coming to terms with being true to who they are". Here the quotations are before the period since it is not a complete sentence or a quote, rather a part of it. I have seen this being followed across all the FA articles I have read through or their FACs also. —IB [ Poke ] 08:30, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- @IndianBio: Question on the quotation marks and punctuation issue. I have looked up several websites that have said the period is always inside the quotation mark. Do you have anything that shows otherwise? Kees08 (talk) 07:35, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Kees08: I have made corrections to the article and replied to you wherever I felt it was not necessary. I thank you immensely for your patience. —IB [ Poke ] 17:11, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
- @IndianBio: Timetable for this? Kees08 (talk) 05:12, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
- No worries! Seemed uncharacteristic for you not respond immediately. :) Good luck! ---Another Believer (Talk) 05:15, 7 February 2017 (UTC)