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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 13:42, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'll take this review. Here is an image check
Yep. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:00, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • I watched the version we have in the article, and there's nothing there that cites "stereotypically Irish", or Nation. Since some of the contents of the plot section are not immediately cited by the film itself (i.e. they need some contextual knowledge/analysis), I'd expect a reference for this reading of the plot.
Cited
  • While none of the identities of the people who appeared in the picture are known, it is known the women - Too much knowing. Can we unknow a known?
Changed first known to recorded. Now we know less.
  • Link "bill" for people who aren't familiar with such terms
Done. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:01, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date for the Time reference?
None that I could see
Dunn. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:14, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
None useful that I found (most are just ads that give the name of the film and its length)

Thanks for the review. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:00, 10 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]