A fact from Kampoeng Rawa appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 July 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that although the Kampoeng Rawa tourist attraction (dock pictured) was meant to raise awareness of the ecology of Lake Rawa Pening, it has been criticised for potentially damaging the ecosystem?
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Greetings! I'm taking this GA review. I will do my first read-through and my initial review should be posted in the morning. Cheers, TLSuda (talk) 02:58, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead the sentence starting "Facilities include..." seems like a run on. My opinion is that it should end after "dock" and start a new sentence with "during"
Add a period at the end of the caption of the image under the Location and facilities section. And add a period ad the end of the caption in the first image.
"A variety of activities are available onsite, including ATVs, flying fox, jet skis, and fishing." 3/4 of those are not activities but are objects. you might could add the words "areas for" after including?
Everything looks good! I'm happy to promote this article to GA status. Keep up the high quality when adding about what happens with the permission controversy when that is settled. Cheers, TLSuda (talk) 21:58, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Kampoeng Rawa is a tourist attraction in Ambarawa, Central Java, located within the green belt around Lake Rawa Pening. Opened in August 2012, it is owned and operated by twelve groups of farmers and fishermen who were funded by the Artha Prima Credit Union. It is intended to improve the welfare of local farmers and fishermen while promoting an understanding of the lake's ecology. Facilities include a floating restaurant, pendopo, crafts centre, fishing area, and docks. It has been challenged for its lack of permission to build in the green belt and the possible ecological impact.Photograph: Chris Woodrich