Talk:James the Deacon/GA1
GA Review
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OK, next up. I’ve made these changes including a switch to BE (centered to centred)
- Gregorian mission who came to England – which came, if the mission is the subject
- fixed
- court of King Edwin of Deira to marry Edwin. – clunky, perhaps court of Edwin of Deira to marry the king or court of Deira to marry King Edwin?
- fixed
- Edwin of Deira is a redirect
- fixed
- Edwin died in battle at Hatfield against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla in 633. – ...fighting against..., or perhaps Edwin died in battle against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla at Hatfield in 663?
- Fixed
- previous to Edwin's – prior to ?
- fixed
- for celebrated Easter – something missing here
- fixed (it was a missing "he"
- after this – perhaps after the synod?
- fixed
- Why are there two days list for this saint, especially when the October date appears to be unsourced?
- Samuel fixed this. It's two different days for two different denominations.
No real problems jimfbleak (talk) 10:03, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- Think I got them all! Ealdgyth - Talk 14:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
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Keep them coming! jimfbleak (talk) 16:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)