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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Iyengar Yoga/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:28, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:28, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
- Many thanks, will respond promptly. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:40, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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History
[edit]- "B. K. S. Iyengar began teaching gradually," - clarify what exactly Iyengar was teaching
- Done.
- "The book has been described as the bible of modern yoga," - perhaps mention who described the boook as the bible of modern yoga
- Done.
- "and has been translated into at least 23 languages.[9][1]" - refs in numerical order please
- Done.
- Wikilink Pune
- Done.
- "in Inner London Education Authority evening classes" - try to avoid a violation of WP:SEAOFBLUE by rewriting this section of text
- Done.
- I believe the fifth paragraph in this section would be better off merged into the fourth paragraph in this section
- Done.
Style
[edit]- "The style "emphasises precision and alignment"," - according to whom?
- Attributed.
- "i.e. moving a little in the right direction" - slightly is more formal
- Edited.
- "Postures are held for a relatively long period compared to other schools of yoga;" - clarify it is a long period of time
- Done.
- "to enjoy the benefits of many asanas" - this sounds a little informal and might be better off to be made more formal if possible
- Done
- "Postures are held for a relatively long period" - same query as the third one in this section
- Done.
- "(such as Trikonasana and Virabhadrasana[18])," - the reference would be better off placed at the end of the comma
- Done.
- Trikonasana should not be linked twice in close succession
- Fixed.
- Delink Mary Dunn since she is already linked in the previous section
- Done.
Training, certification, and standards
[edit]- "and updated its ethics standards (based on the Yamas and Niyamas in the Yoga Sutras of Patanjali)" - don't think the parentheses are appropriate here
- Removed.
References
[edit]- Reference 4 should include the page number that states where the information is located
- This is intentionally citing the whole book, to fit the context of that sentence.
- Reference 19 is missing the date it was published
- Added.
- Reference 26 should mention the date it was published and the author who wrote the source
- Added.
- References 27 & 28 should mention the date the sources were accessed
- Added.
Overall the main issues are with the prose and some fields missing from a few of the references. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:32, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:00, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
- Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:00, 22 March 2020 (UTC)