Talk:Intro (End of the World)/GA2

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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 02:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this soon. Glad that this got sorted out at AfD. Ippantekina (talk) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

"After the release of her sixth studio album Positions (2020)" comma before album title
"The album's lead single "Yes, And?"" → lead single, "Yes, And?", ...
""Intro (End of the World)" is reported to be the second song Grande wrote for Eternal Sunshine" reported by who?
- Business Insider; I don't know where did they get that info from whom but they did claimed it. So that's why I put "reported" in the sentence. Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"places emphasis on" emphasizes
"How can I tell if I'm in the right relationship?". remove the full stop after the quotation mark per MOS:"
singing the lyric "If it all ended tomorrow, would I be the one on your mind?". ditto
"The track was conceived as a companion to the song both in its sound and lyrics" which track/song are we talking about here...?
- "Intro (End of the World)"; I have reworded it to that Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Spotcheck: 1, 14, 21, 22, 33
- 14: ""healing after a breakup"" should be "healing-from-a-breakup"
Include |url-access=limited in Rolling Stone refs

Hey @Ippantekina! I have addressed your questions and done the rest. Gained (talk) 07:57, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]