Talk:Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}' has a corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims", this sentence doesn't make sense. Do you mean ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)' has corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims" or something like that?- Check.
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
In the lead and throughout the article, example "It was released on June 30, 2009 by Walt Disney Records as a promotional single" commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}'" ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)'".- I don't understand the first part about the commas. As for the title, it is fixed. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:15, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
- I got it and check.
- I don't understand the first part about the commas. As for the title, it is fixed. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:15, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Reference 3 has a different url link path, so you might want to update that.
- I don't understand. I clicked the link and it sends me to the page directly. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:17, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
- It does send you to the page, but the url link has changed, and check.
- I don't understand. I clicked the link and it sends me to the page directly. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:17, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
- Reference 3 has a different url link path, so you might want to update that.
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Not that much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
- Pass or Fail:
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you to Ipodnano for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:10, 27 May 2010 (UTC)