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May 27, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed

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Merging

This article should NOT be merged to Hannah Montana 3 per WP:NSONGS. The song has charted on a national chart and there is definitely enough sourced information to warrant a detailed article that is not a stub.--Rockin56 (talk) 18:07, 11 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Citation number 4

Hey, I cannot seem to fix citation number 4. The format is correct yet it appears as it should not. If you can fix it, please do so. Thank you. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 19:50, 15 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I resolved the issue, nevermind. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 19:50, 15 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Extended play

Before, the article stated an extended play for the song was released in the iTunes Store. It included details such as its release date, September 5, 2009, and the tracks featured. However, none of this had a source and I scavenged through iTunes for the United States, Canada, and the United Kingdom and could not find such release. If you find a source please feel free to leave the URL here and I'll add it to the article, if you want. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 20:05, 15 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}' has a corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims", this sentence doesn't make sense. Do you mean ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)' has corresponding dance moves designed by Jamal Sims" or something like that?
Check.

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
In the lead and throughout the article, example "It was released on June 30, 2009 by Walt Disney Records as a promotional single" commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Background section, "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill}'" ---> "'Ice Cream Freeze (Let's Chill)'".
I don't understand the first part about the commas. As for the title, it is fixed. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 05:15, 27 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I got it and check.
Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
Reference 3 has a different url link path, so you might want to update that.
I don't understand. I clicked the link and it sends me to the page directly. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 05:17, 27 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It does send you to the page, but the url link has changed, and check.

B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Not that much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!

-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 17:02, 26 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you to Ipodnano for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:10, 27 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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