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Try to reduce, explain, or wikilink (or some combination thereof) the meteo jargon. No links or context for SSHWS, ridge, tropical wave, vorticity, gyre (you pipe-linked ocean gyre here, but that's entirely different to the sort of gyre you're discussing), convection, eye.
Copyedit for clarity and flow, paying special attention to redundancies and dangling modifiers and other things that should have been caught before publishing ("Over 1,500 homes were damaged by [...] damage", "One death [...] declared missing".
One stubby paragraph of met. history seems skimpy for a modern NHC system. By the same token, I'd recommend seeking out more sources of impact info. As it stands, you have just two citations that aren't to the US government. – Juliancolton | Talk19:40, 5 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
