Talk:Hurricane Madeline (1998)

Content

I hate to be the one who brings it up, but the content in the article is largely the same as what's in the season article. The damage and deaths were not directly caused by the storm, so the $750 million damage figure is not correct. Isn't there any more, new information? ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:13, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

Actually, it is much more detailed than the season article, especially in the storm history. There is also more info on preparations. And no, a google search turned up nothing, and since the hurricane newspaper archive is down I guess there isn't much more to expand it with. Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 21:00, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Madeline (1998)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   In the Preparations and impact section, this sentence ---> "Also, the hurricane canceled a fishing expedition in the Sea of Cortez due to rough surf", may need to be explained a little, I mean I know what it is, but how 'bout the person that reads this article.

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   Does Reference 12 cover all this ---> "In anticipation of Madeline, the government of Mexico issued a tropical storm warning for the Baja California Peninsula southward from La Paz, and a hurricane warning from San Patricio, Jalisco to El Dorado, Sinaloa, including the Islas Marías. The storm was initially forecasted to move ashore near Mazatlán, promting officials to close the city's port. President Ernesto Zedillo advised potentially affected residents to stay indoors or seek refuge in shelters"?

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   If the above statement can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article! Also, contact me if the above statements are answered.

--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:03, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I clarified that sentence, And yep, ref #12 covers all that info. Cheers, Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 01:08, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Thank you for explaining the sentence and thank you clarifying that Reference 12 covered all that info., because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 15:47, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Thanks! Juliancolton ^{Tropical Cyclone} 15:51, 19 June 2008 (UTC)