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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Hurricanehink, I am going to review this article and will hopefully finish sometimes today. Overall, nice job!--12george1 (talk) 20:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • " It formed on September 12 in the Gulf of Mexico from a broad disturbance that also spawned Manuel on the Pacific coast." - Since you mention the Gulf of Mexico and "Pacific coast", you could also be referring to the United States. :P
  • "Subsequently, increased wind shear weakened the convection as" - Wikilink wind shear and convection
  • "Ingrid made landfall just south of" - Wikilink landfall
  • "Rainfall from the storm peaked at 20.11 in (511 mm) in Tuxpan, Veracruz." - If you are using metric first throughout the rest of the article, then it should be inches converted to millimeters. Ditto for the other rainfall totals.
  • "making it the first time since 1958 that tropical cyclones struck both coasts of the country within one day.[13]" - Can you state the names of those storms? Apparently they were Tropical Storm Alma and Tropical Storm Two.
  • There is inconsistency with the authors names in the references. For examples, reference #3 says "Aliva/Brennan", while reference #12 has " Richard J. Pasch; David A. Zelinsky".
  • Remember to use (in Spanish) for all of the Spanish sources.
  • The last name of the author for reference #1 is misspelled.
  • Reference #32 is a deadlink. No surprise there. :P Btw, the urls for the Storm Data publications die after only 24 hours now.