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Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: I think you are at the standard to be autopatrolled. well done.

Aszx5000 (talk) 11:44, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 20:17, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that following her death in 2019, Huang Wenxiu was elevated into a national model by the Chinese Communist Party in recognition of her work as a party secretary of a village in rural China?
Created by Toadboy123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

Toadboy123 (talk) 13:44, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Good except for some minor issues. Long enough, new enough at the time of nomination, Earwig detects no copyvios. Aside from the one failed verification I tagged, all the English-language sources seem OK. It might be good to wikilink the names of the news sources if they have Wikipedia articles, just to make it totally clear what their relation to the CCP is, but the page text handles the English-language CCP media outlets appropriately.
Minor grammar issues: I would expect "killed by a flash flood" rather than "killed by flash flood". This could be a variety of English thing, though. I'd also expect "Title of" instead of just "Title".
I prefer ALT0 to ALT1, but both could be condensed and punched up. Apocheir (talk) 01:09, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Apocheir: I have wikilinked the news sources which have articles in Wikipedia and also corrected the minor grammar issues which you stated. Let me know if the hook is now good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 13:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Page looks fine now, just marking as AGF because I can't read hanzi. For the hook, this is going to get tweaked by the people who do the DYK process anyways, but how about:
Apocheir (talk) 19:57, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Apocheir: Fine with it. Toadboy123 (talk) 14:20, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]