Talk:Haunter (Pokémon)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:16, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 18:50, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: QuicoleJR (talk · contribs) 13:23, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this one. QuicoleJR (talk) 13:23, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kung Fu Man: I have completed my first pass over the article. It is overall very well-written, and I only have a few things I would like fixed.

First introduced in the video games Pokémon Red and Blue, This information does not appear in the body. I know it’s obvious, but it should still have a source.

Should be in the first sentence of appearances, using the IGN ref to back it up?

Standing 5 ft 3 in (160 cm) tall, I hate to be pedantic, but it is a little weird reading that when Haunter doesn't stand at all.

It's more a figure of speech, but rewrote the sentence a bit to adjust for that.

The first paragraph of the Appearances section is a little random with which games it mentions. Are those the only games it appears in?

Made it clearer that it's an includes list and not every game he's been in (also added the missing TCG mention)

You’re probably used to me saying this by now, but there are a lot of quotes in the Reception section. Could you please try to paraphrase a couple of them?

Paraphrased some and reworked a few others, should flow better.

This article passes the spotcheck. Again, great work! QuicoleJR (talk) 14:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@QuicoleJR: I think I nailed everything, hit me up if there's anything else!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 02:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I looked through the article again, and I did not find any more issues that need to be fixed. I will now pass the article. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.