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Hello! I'm leaving some edits for my Freshman Seminar class! Here is a quick evaluation of this article: 1.) The facts are accurately cited and referenced, but one of the last links, "Garnet Valley School Profile 2010-11" does not work. I have fixed this. 2.) Most sections of the article are relevant to Garnet Valley High School, but the organization or structure could definitely be reformatted. Perhaps, the "Academic"/"Student Performance" section could be placed first, or even further improved with the addition of a "History" section. Following this edit, the subsections could be ordered in terms of relative importance. 3.) This article is neutral, however, the emphasis in certain sections can be seen as having a partial position. For example, the sports section only focused on lacrosse and volleyball. This, however, is most likely due to the sparse details of this High School profile. 4.) Much of the information seems to be out of date, and there are many gap in the timeline of this school's article. Much more information could be included, but this would be a larger project.

A great Wikipedia article to reference for a more comprehensive school profile is Stuyvesant High School.

Hope this evaluation was of some assistance! Bkim11 (talk) 18:23, 12 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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