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Nice subject; Some comments!

  • please check interpunction. always place a space before a (; and a space after a </ref>, so:
this is ok (like this); this is not ok(like this)
this is good[1] reference, but this[2]is not ok
this is ok; number 1 .... this is not ok ; number one
  • finish the sentences that have now "..."
  • references from baidu can not be used on wikipedia. it is important to find other references. When you make a reference, make a translation of the title in English between brackets; add the source (website etc) and if possible: the author.
  • How do we know that fruit carving began 700BC, but the earlies record is of 1000 AD?
  • think about plurals in the first sentence ...imageS like fishing boatS, etc...
  • what is arhat?
  • For the classification section, references ar needed
  • Never use "you" in an encyclopedia. Use passive voice instead (it is possible to view ....)
  • Making the carves of a boat, including a poem. How is this possible? Is this true? or a fairy tale?
  • When you use dynasty indications of time (late Qing etc), always provide a year-range. Most readers are not familar at all with Chinese dynasties...

Good luck; don't hesitate to ask questions if you need! L.tak (talk) 20:55, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

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