Talk:Fearless (Taylor's Version)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 10:17, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Seems fitting to call dibs for this review now, since I might be going to her concert with friends and family in Melbourne in February if we get tickets in the Ticketek marketplace starting September!

Anyways, I'm gonna start this in a week or so. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 10:17, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for taking up the review :) please do ping me when you complete it. Too bad I haven't secured tix for the Eras Tour in Japan but hopefully I could get some resell tix... Ippantekina (talk) 04:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• "2021, through Republic Records." → "2021, via Republic Records."  Done
• "wrote 11 tracks alone and" → "wrote 11 tracks by herself and"  Done
• "produced all but the unreleased tracks to replicate" → "produced all the tracks from the original album to replicate"

• Not done because the re-recorded tracks include "Today Was a Fairytale" which was not an album track

• Crossed out. N

• "an indie-and-electronic-orientated soundscape" → "an indie and electronic-orientated soundscape"

• Not done I think this is the general hyphen rule

• Crossed out. N

• "Fearless's lead single" → "Fearless' lead single" with the wikilink  Partly done – see below

• Not done with the 's (MOS:'S), done with the pipe

• Pipe drum programming to Programming (music)  Partly done – was changed to "drum programming"
• "in the English-speaking countries" → "in all English-speaking countries,"

• Not done technically not all of the English-speaking countries (which include some Caribbean island-states and Singapore..)

• Crossed out. N

Background

• Image looks pretty good!
• "Nashville-based Big Machine Records" → "Nashville-based independent record label Big Machine Records"  Done
• Pipe pop radio to Contemporary hit radio

• Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN

• Crossed out. N

• "Under Big Machine Records," → "Under Big Machine"  Done
• "ways with Big Machine after" → "ways with the label, after"  Done

Production

• "which included 13" → "which includes 13"  Done
• "tracks already released in 2008" → "tracks that were released in 2008,"  Done
• Images look good!
• "20 re-recorded tracks, which are all subtitled" → "20 tracks, that are all subtitled"

Music and lyrics

• Looks good!

"From the Vault" tracks

• Audio sample and everything else looks good!

Marketing and release

• Logo image looks good!
• Pipe sepia-toned to Photographic print toning

Commercial performance

• "Billboard Artist 100" → "Billboard Artist 100"  Partly done – was changed to "Billboard's Artist 100"
• "two in Austria and Germany," → "two in Austria and Germany,"  Done

Critical reception

• Pipe weighted mean to Weighted arithmetic mean  Done

Accolades and impact

• Good

Track listing

• Looks good!

Personnel

Musicians

• Pipe drums to drum kit  Done

Technical

• Isn't Taylor credited as a producer on Tidal?

• It's true, but I reckon it is not necessary here as that information can be found in the Track listing section.

• Have now realised that it is mentioned on musicians subheading, so crossed out. N

• Change "masters engineering" to "mastering" and pipe the wikilink to be Mastering engineer  Done

Charts

Weekly charts

• Looks good!

Year-end charts

• Looks good!

Certifications

• Looks good!

Release history

• "" → ""  Done

See also

• Looks good!

Notes

• Only one minor change is needed, so not much. The notelist looks good. No changes needed.

• Note a, d, e, f, g, h, i, j, k and l – Finish sentences with full stops.

• Not done as they are not full sentences

• Crossed out. N

References

• Copyvio score – It looks pretty good at 28.6%!
• The reference list looks good.

Print sources

• Looks good!

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of these issues are fixed; got it done within 3 days, instead of a week! Good luck Ippantekina! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 08:14, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

  Thanks for the review, Vaughan J.. Except where I responded, I believe all points have been addressed now :) Ippantekina (talk) 03:14, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

  I just crossed out all the things that you responded to, but there are still some things that have not been changed. I pointed that out by using the  Not done template. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:50, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

  Ippantekina Forgot to ping. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:53, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

  Should all be done by now except the sepia-toned pipe per WP:NOTBROKEN. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 07:16, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

  Pass now; just crossed out the sepia tone pipe. Good job! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 07:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

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