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Hello, Chaotic Enby! I was reviewing @Mtvdanilo's work and saw your tag. Where do you see parts that promote the subject in a subjective manner? Most sentences are pretty objective. If you could point it out for us to improve these parts, we'd be happy to do it! Sintropepe (talk) 20:35, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi! Thanks a lot for the question! It's not especially bad (and I hesitated to put this tag), but some word choices like a symbol of the struggle (and later became a symbol of the fight against the military dictatorship) aren't ideal (except with much stronger sourcing actually calling her that way). Also, gained more and more notoriety because of her seriousness and commitment can sound promotional, as well as the emphasis of after 25 years of fighting for memory, truth and justice (where after 25 years would've been enough). You also mention twice that she was one of the main pressure forces that led to the enactment of Law 9.140/95, but the sources don't seem to explicitly say that. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 18:27, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Chaotic Enby, how are you? I'd like to ask you to reconsider the label. I've added more sources and tried to reconsider some information to better meet the good suggestions you proposed. Thank you for reading and commenting. Good contributions! Mtvdanilo (talk) 19:13, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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