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Map issues

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The map used seems unhelpful, it doesn't show EMRS bases, or indeed the major hospitals. TheMouseMen (talk) 13:26, 27 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added map showing the base locations (Glasgow and Aberdeen). The map I've added could be improved, perhaps with MTCs and Trauma Units. Ideally also with a scale (miles/km). TMallinson (talk) 13:12, 5 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]


FOI citation

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The foi citation is EMRS stating how they run, therefore is reliable! Imaginarium Monkey (talk) 22:17, 30 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Merger?

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Should EMRS be merged into ScotSTAR? Does ScotSTAR run EMRS? Are they the same organisation? TheMouseMen (talk) 11:43, 27 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have clarified and cited this in the introductory paragraph. EMRS is an organisation within ScotSTAR, so I suspect is reasonable to be kept as-is for now. RDMcHenry (talk) 09:59, 29 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Data misrepresentation?

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My recent edit changed to "The teams attend around 1 prehospital patient a day", it previously said 2-3 prehospital patients a day. From the latest cited data in this article (by another wikipedia editor with COI with this page); 3633 prehospital patients seen by EMRS in 10 years. That's 363/year. That's around 1/day (just less than), furthermore, this should really be divided by the two teams, so each team sees 0.5 prehospital patients per day.

I am concerned that some recent edits were made to push the article towards a more positive and promotional POV. In this case by misrepresenting the latest presented data. If the data are incorrect, we can change wikipedia. TheMouseMen (talk) 13:16, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for this, and clearly the importance of neutral point of view is key to Wikipedia. While I have my previously acknowledged COI (and wrote the paper that is being quoted) I'm concerned that the source is misrepresented in your summary. The paper cited is a longitudinal view, and the numbers you quote are an average over 10 years of data, not representing current practice. Current figures are presented in the paper, which would seem to be a more representative place to start? Clearly engaging in an edit war over this is a poor use of time - given the fact that current numbers are presented in this peer-reviewed literature, would it be acceptable to revert to the previous wording? RDMcHenry (talk) 15:15, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]