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GA Review

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Reviewer: Keresluna (talk · contribs) 16:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I'll review this chemistry article, but might be a little slow in doing it. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:30, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Grammar

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Feel free to reject these suggestions as you see fit. Keres🌕Luna edits! 17:19, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • 'grain structure, grains orientation,' → 'grain structure, grain orientation,' checkY
  • 'wavelength dispersive X-ray spectroscopy (WDS)' →'wavelength-dispersive X-ray spectroscopy (WDS)' checkY

Pattern formation and collection

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  • 'compact lens which focuses the image' → 'compact lens that focuses the image'
  • 'intersections form what are known as Kikuchi patterns or electron backscatter patterns' → 'intersections form what is known as Kikuchi patterns or electron backscatter patterns' checkY
  • 'to the crystal orientation (based upon their interplanar angles).' → 'to the crystal orientation (based on their interplanar angles).' checkY
  • 'one must use a many beam dynamical' → 'one must use a many-beam dynamical' checkY
  • 'EBSP quality is sensitive to the surface preparation' → 'EBSP quality is sensitive to surface preparation' checkY
  • 'do not mention a definition, or do not even present' → 'do not mention a definition or do not even present' checkY

Orientation and phase mapping

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  • 'leading methods of the indexing performed by most' → 'leading methods of indexing performed by most' checkY
  • 'algorithms and calculations, but is essential' → 'algorithms and calculations but is essential' checkY
  • 'each of these methods are cumbersome' → 'each of these methods is cumbersome' checkY
  • 'Recent development of AstroEBSD and PCGlobal' → 'The recent development of AstroEBSD and PCGlobal' checkY

Strain measurement

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  • 'measured geometrical shifts from in the pattern' → 'measured geometrical shifts in the pattern' checkY
  • 'by using Einstein summation convention with symmetry' → 'by using the Einstein summation convention with symmetry' checkY
  • 'which can produce an accurate measurements' → 'which can produce accurate measurements' (note: I don't think you need the wikilink to accurate in there) checkY (left the wiki-link, accuracy and precision are normally confused)

Applications

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  • 'average atomic number of the sample, and is used' → 'average atomic number of the sample and is used'
  • 'which has been introduced around 1970s, and' → 'which has been introduced around the 1970s, and' checkY
  • 'prepared for TKD using an FIB or ion milling machine' → 'prepared for TKD using a FIB or ion milling machine' checkY
thanks for the these comments. I left some of the Oxford commas FuzzyMagma (talk) 14:44, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Additional comments

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The chart in the section 'Precision and development' needs proper axes, for an example, see lithium thiocyanate. Keres🌕Luna edits! 17:20, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Done FuzzyMagma (talk) 15:44, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Keresluna you left 'y' outside, i.e., {{GAList/check|}y}. maybe you want to correct that FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:40, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]