Talk:Edward Caledon Bruce/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: APK (talk · contribs) 04:45, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:07, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"It was around this same time Bruce" -- 'same' isn't warrented here
"thank God I have my sight yet - all Nature can " -- should be an em-dash instead of the normal dash, im assuming
Direct quotations can go with a citation, even in the lead
The lead says "Several years later", while the article says "in his late teens", which seems to be a natural contradiction ...
"He kept a diary during his trip," , " During his journey, Bruce kept a diary" -- repetetion
that quotation in the last para of early life needs proper formatting of the ellipsis with nbsp and an em-dash instead of the normal dash, im assuming
"His early portraits ... in the early 1860s." -- needs a citation
"purchased from Bruce by Dr. J. B. McCaw" -- Any specefic reason for specifyting 'Dr.' in the name?
Formatting of dates in the references needs consistency

Thats about it. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:20, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I think all of your concerns have been addressed. Let me know if you see anything else. APK hi :-) (talk) 04:18, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]