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Edward Caledon Bruce has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: January 10, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:03, 10 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: APK (talk · contribs) 04:45, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:07, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"It was around this same time Bruce" -- 'same' isn't warrented here
"thank God I have my sight yet - all Nature can " -- should be an em-dash instead of the normal dash, im assuming
Direct quotations can go with a citation, even in the lead
The lead says "Several years later", while the article says "in his late teens", which seems to be a natural contradiction ...
"He kept a diary during his trip," , " During his journey, Bruce kept a diary" -- repetetion
that quotation in the last para of early life needs proper formatting of the ellipsis with nbsp and an em-dash instead of the normal dash, im assuming
"His early portraits ... in the early 1860s." -- needs a citation
"purchased from Bruce by Dr. J. B. McCaw" -- Any specefic reason for specifyting 'Dr.' in the name?
Formatting of dates in the references needs consistency

Thats about it. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:20, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I think all of your concerns have been addressed. Let me know if you see anything else. APK hi :-) (talk) 04:18, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.