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Edward A. Craig

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Does the Korean War section need clean up?

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To me, the section under Craig's Korean War experience is long on what units were doing and very short about what Craig was doing during this time. I would think this should be more about him and the overall battle informaiton contained in the appropriate articles. Am I alone in that thought? Bigjimleo (talk) 16:50, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Agree. The whole first paragraph should go, and probably half of the rest of the text. Best, Markvs88 (talk) 17:13, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Agree. I read through the entire article without thinking too much about it, but about 3/4 through the section about the Korean War was wondering if I had inadvertantly clicked on a link to a general article about that battle. There is one short paragraph about Gen. Craig's final promotion and subsequent service that occurs twice, bookending the entire section about the Musan battle. Cyberherbalist (talk) 20:05, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Agree. It's a wholesale copy & paste job from 1st Provisional Marine Brigade with very little specific information about the subject, so I'm going to delete it except for the relevant paragraph. >MinorProphet (talk) 09:57, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]