Talk:Ciutat Morta

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Review: March 21, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ciutat Morta/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga (talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

re "expanding #Production to meet the third criteria" I added some lines yesterday and I've added some more today from the last review I found. I've also put in the academic analysis that was previously in further reading. I don't think this film will ever have a production section the size of say Blade Runner 2049, I'm happy the main aspects are covered. Back to you, thanks! Mujinga (talk) 11:38, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.

Done Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Poster" → "Promotional release poster"

Done Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Don't use "<br />" in the infobox. Use "plainlist" instead.

is this a MOS issue? Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Well, it says on the film infobox template that plainlist is preferred, and it also helps mobile readers.

Those are good reasons, thanks.

Done Mujinga (talk) 11:17, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead, remove the comma after "until 2015".

I've read it a few times, I prefer it with the comma. Could rephrase if it's a big issue. Might be a British English / US English thing? Mujinga (talk) 10:02, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The issue was that the sentence is kinda short, so a comma wasn't necessary.

Plot

This section is over 400 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
Remove the comma after "hit on the head".

agreed on that one Mujinga (talk) 10:08, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after the first naming of Rodrigo Lanza.

in the brackets? I'd rather not add one there Mujinga (talk) 10:08, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I see your point; it was an Oxford comma thing.

Remove the comma after "Alfredo Pestana".

that one seems good to keep since the commas are bracketing the names Mujinga (talk) 10:08, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after "they looked".

i didn't add the comma but i did rephrase since the sentence was clunky Mujinga (talk) 10:08, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"son of diplomat" → "son of a diplomat"

Done Mujinga (talk) 10:08, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Themes

Add a comma after "gentrification".

don't see the need for it, we must have different comma styles Mujinga (talk) 10:10, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, it was another Oxford comma thing.

Other than that, this section looks good.

Production

"seven-storey" → "seven-story"

"storey" is BrEng Mujinga (talk) 10:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".

again, not seeing the need for it Mujinga (talk) 10:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"decide" → "decided"

Done good spot! Mujinga (talk) 10:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This section is extremely short, so try expanding it.

I'll have a look to see if there are any more sources since November when I wrote it. Mujinga (talk) 10:12, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a few more lines Mujinga (talk) 11:35, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
added in the academic analysis from further reading Mujinga (talk) 11:35, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

Add a comma after "June 8, 2013".

agreed! Mujinga (talk) 10:17, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"action" → "act"

yeah that makes sense Mujinga (talk) 10:17, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"department" → "Department"

rephrased tighter to source Mujinga (talk) 10:17, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

The word "onesidedness" doesn't sound right, so maybe reword it?

went back to the source, rephrased Mujinga (talk) 10:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add more reviews (if possible).

I'll have another check although this is all I could find before Mujinga (talk) 10:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
added two more reviews Mujinga (talk) 11:49, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

Remove the comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".

i rather keep it, since it provides a space for breath. Mujinga (talk) 10:27, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after "Cs, PP".

i rather not add one Mujinga (talk) 10:27, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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