Talk:Chips and dip/GA1

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Reviewer: Yoshi24517 (talk · contribs) 18:01, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing for a review, will start shortly. Yoshi24517 ^Chat _Online 18:01, 23 February 2016 (UTC) First things first: please remove the pictures from the article as per WP:Galleries. I will then finish reviewing.Yoshi24517 ^Chat _Online 18:10, 23 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoshi24517: I have removed a couple of images, moved one to the article text, and added a caption to the gallery "Dips with tortilla chips". The remaining images convey different types of dips that may be used with tortilla chips. There are a multitude, but three images in the gallery seems to not be excessive. This is in the spirit of WP:Galleries, where it states, "the use of a gallery section may be appropriate in some Wikipedia articles if a collection of images can illustrate aspects of a subject that cannot be easily or adequately described by text or individual images". Let me know what you think. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 09:21, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That's great! Now, per WP:LEAD please expand the lead. Make sure it adequately summarizes the article. Tagging: @Northamerica1000: Yoshi24517 ^Chat _Online 17:32, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoshi24517:

Done. Lead expanded. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:23, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yoshi24517: I managed to find an example image of crackers and dip, which I have added to the article. Per this addition, I moved the example of Chile con queso to the image gallery. However, this works in my opinion, because chile con queso is mentioned in the section the image was moved to. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:52, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

N.b. More (new) sources have been added to the article. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 06:00, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hehehe, your making me hungry!!! Now, here are a couple more things you can do before I pass the article:

1. Now I want you to provide an infobox for the article, if one can be made for it.

Done. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 17:41, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

2. After that, make sure the article has gone through a satisfactory copyediting so that is satisfies criterion 1a of WP:WIAFA.
After you do all that. I will pass the article. Tagging:@Northamerica1000:

@Yoshi24517: Done. The article meets all five criteria of section 1 at WP:WIAFA. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 17:44, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Overall: ✓ Pass. Yoshi24517 ^Chat _Online 19:59, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]