Talk:Cheetah reintroduction in India/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 04:06, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 04:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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I'll be reviewing this. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking this up. Let me know the comments. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 06:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Let me look at this now. Expect comments in a few hours. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 18:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review

more than 70 years ago. It would be better to state the date

Done

The Asiatic cheetah (Acinonyx jubatus venaticus) whose range once included most of India were driven to extinction locally with the last known sightings recorded in early 1950s. Why are you repeating the same info?

Modified the line to indicate the reasons

After the cheetahs became locally extinct to Following the local extinction,

Done

re-introduce cheetahs back into the wild. Where is the wild?

Added

This included initial plans to re-introduce the asiatic cheetah from Iran in the 1970s which were shelved due to political instability in Iran and the dwindling population of the species in the existent range. We are missing punctuations

Added

from the north western India "The" is not needed

Done

to the Gangetic plain on the east In the east

Done

from wild mothers What?

Rephrased

population of Cheetahs. Why the caps?

Changed

Cheetahs rarely breed in captivity as there is only one record of a litter ever born to captive animals. This is false. Does this refer to Asiatic cheetahs? The source is also 15 years old.

It refers to asiatic cheetahs. There is only one litter ever born to captive animals. Giving an alternate source as well.

In the late 1908s, What?

Corrected

link separated to Split (phylogenetics)

Not clear

into the wild in steps In steps?

Re-phrased

the first recorded live cheetah births It was one birth

It was four cubs? Anyways, changed.

was reported reportedly Why?

Corrected

Any information on the impacts of reintroducing cheetahs to these parks?

Have added a section.

For background, please only use journals, books or scholarly articles

Done for the most part except the recent record of asiatic cheetah breeding (CNN)

Shouldn't project cheetah fall under Re-introduction plans

Modified the first title to early re-introduction plans; If I move project cheetah under it, it will create too many tiers

In see also please remove all the other non Acinonyx jubatus articles and add Project cheetah as further information. Basically, just remove the see also section.

Removed.

More to come. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 16:34, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

Cite 4 needs page nos.

Fixed

Cite 5 needs page nos.

Fixed

Shouldn't there be author names in the news citations?

Not a mandatory requirement. Still added authors wherever available/applicable

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Ans: ${\frac {32}{5}}$ Y

Please try to solve the above problem. Just for fun :) It's very simple. My work is done here. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 07:21, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wolverine, comments have been addressed. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magentic Manifestations (talk • contribs)

Thanks for your work and answer. Promoting now. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 04:02, 8 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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