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Request for advice regarding improving the page.

We understand we need to improve the Caspian Horse page. I am new to Wikipedia so I wonder if someone could please advise me as to how to improve it please? Many thanks Danielle Foster (talk) 14:37, 22 October 2014 (UTC)Danielle Foster 21/10/14Danielle Foster[reply]

The text has changed to bold type .. I am not aware of having changed it and would like to undo the bold function but I don't know how to do it. Can you help please? Thank you in advance Danielle Foster (talk) 15:15, 22 October 2014 (UTC)Danielle Foster 22/10/14Danielle Foster (talk) 15:15, 22 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Basically, compare this article to similar short, but better-written ones, such as Suffolk Punch or Cleveland Bay, and try to make it more like them; better sources, improved formatting, and so on. Here, we have photos up the wazoo (too many, really) but way too few footnotes. There's a lot of text, but we don't know where it came from, if it's accurate and most of all, if it was copied word-for word from someplace. We need better (and reliable) sources added; usually at least one source per paragraph and often more (see, e.g. Thoroughbred as a good example). Montanabw ^(talk) 03:55, 23 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]