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Neutrality

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This article reads like and advert / press release. That needs to be modified to be in line Wikipedia's policy of articles adhering to a neutral point of view. -- Whpq (talk) 18:25, 21 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Founders of JCB

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The article wrongly claimed Lady Bamford and Sir Anthony founded JCB, with citation, however clearly the company was infact founded by its name-sake, and father to Anthony, Joseph Cyril Bamford. I have removed this reference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1.186.244.250 (talk) 18:18, 18 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Still reads like an advert

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This article still reads like spam, with whole uncited sections. The claims are grandiose - but are there cites that aren't in deprecated sources for all of this? - David Gerard (talk) 23:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've restored the version from before Duderood's work, which he states was as coordinated with the article subject. I suggest we start again from this - David Gerard (talk) 07:49, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
To editor David Gerard: Impressive dedication to rationalising the tripe. It's been a pleasure to watch you work. Iskandar323 (talk) 07:56, 22 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]