Talk:Cómplices/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 01:38, 20 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this within a week-- Ippantekina (talk) 01:38, 20 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

We don't need to repeat Miguel's full name again after first instance
Do not use small text in infobox per MOS:SMALL
the "rumors circulated online" can be safely removed because they are premature information anyway; remove this bit in the lead also
"with additional recordings done at Ocean Way Recording and Westlake Recording Studios, the mixing was completed at Record Plant studio as well" change the comma to the semicolon for grammar
"dedicated the track to his song, Miguelito" his son
Link Acapulco
Consider trimming down the current "Tour" section and expanding the Cómplices Tour article instead
Allmusic → AllMusic
"comparing the Manuel Alejandro's production" → comparing Alejandro's production
"Amorosi praised Luis Miguel's voice "albeit smoothly, with a richly earnest, romantic voice whose caramel-coated tones oozed perfectly through the grandest of strings and the slightest of Latin rhythms and in his native tongue." " clunky grammar
"In the US, Cómplices debuted and peaked at number 10 the Billboard 200 in the United States" clunky
"As of November 2015, Cómplices sold" had sold

Putting this on hold for seven days. Ippantekina (talk) 09:25, 20 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ippantekina Thanks for the review! In regards to Luis Miguel, that's his middle name, not his last name. See the review for Talk:Mis Romances. @Franlm14: could you take care of the tour section since you worked on that one? And feel free to address the other issues. Erick (talk) 14:34, 20 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ippantekina I am requesting an extension as I have tested positive for COVID-19 and will be unable to make major edits for the rest of the week. Erick (talk) 22:27, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, ping me when you have recovered. Take care, Ippantekina (talk) 01:16, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think everything is addressed, what do you think? I'll spand more the Complices Tour article in the future, but I don't know which part should I trim in this article, I don't think is too long. The Amorosi part is a quote so, I just removed "and in his native tongue". Thanks for the review! @Ippantekina: Franlm14 (talk) 21:16, 23 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Franlm14: A grammatical error "He continues his Mexican tour with four concerts in the Telmex Auditorium of Guadalajara" (shouldn't this be in past tense?) then it's good to go. Ippantekina (talk) 02:39, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ippantekina: Done! Franlm14 (talk) 10:34, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@AJona1992:, you've helped me trimmed the tour section of Amarte Es un Placer (album) before, which parts would you suggests taking out? Erick (talk) 15:09, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Magiciandude: Hey, I've trimmed the section. Feel free to add any content I have removed that you feel is important for the article. Best of luck on your GA! – jona ✉ 14:07, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Now that you've brought me to attention to this article, may I ask why Luis Miguel is referred to simply as "Miguel" at Amarte Es un Placer (album) but "Luis Miguel" here? I understand Miguel is his middle name and don't see issues if we simply refer to him by "Miguel". Alas, this is not a point where I will object to this being promoted to GA. For the tour section, I would cut down the Chicago Sun-Times review to a one-sentence summary. Ippantekina (talk) 02:47, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]