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Suggestions for improvement

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As the AfC reviewer I wanted to leave some friendly suggestions for further refinement of this article, namely:

  • Expanding the lead so it summarizes all the main content of the article (per WP:LEAD)
  • Condensing the plot summary. WP:NOVELPLOT suggests 400-700 words as the usual target range, and the current summary is just over 900 words. (It looks like a previous AfC reviewer noted that the plot summary was uncited, but that's not really a problem -- the assumption is that the plot summary is supported by the book itself, since we're just neutrally describing what's in it and not doing any analysis.)
  • Maybe seeing if you can find some info on the composition and publication of the book? Often there are interesting details in author interviews, which can round out the context for the book.

Just some ideas for ways to make the article stronger! ~ L 🌸 (talk) 03:25, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]