Talk:Born This Way: The Collection/GA1
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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 19:53, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- Lead
- Seems incomplete, especially when looking at A Very Gaga Holiday and Born This Way: The Remix. Make note of critic opinions and such.
- Minor expansion.
- Background
- "the aforementioned remix album" → "its remix album"
- I think aforementioned works here since then I do not need to imply if it is some other remix album
- "Along with the collection she"..... needs comma after "collection"
- Is "Made to be Now" (ref#5) a high-quality source?
- I would not say superb high-quality source like Rolling Stone etc, but passes WP:N, so that not a wide usage is done.
- Reception
- "Stephen Thomas Erlewine of AllMusic made a positive review"..... gave, and link Erlewine
- Remove "website" from "Idolator website"
- Feels empty with only two reviews, let's add more.
- Trust me when I say I could not find any other review for this release @SNUGGUMS: :(
- Track listing
- Unlink "Black Jesus + Amen Fashion"
- Gaga, RedOne, and Laursen should be linked in the "disc two" portion, not "disc three"
- References
- In ref#7 (AllMusic), link Stephen Thomas Erlewine, and "Thomas" should not be in the "last name" field
On hold for seven days.
- Done all of them, just check and let me know. Not much going for in the article. —Indian:BIO · [ ChitChat ] 05:58, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Looks good, GA! SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 11:18, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
Congrats on the GA! A short article, but thanks for your work on it. ----Another Believer (Talk) 16:17, 23 July 2014 (UTC)