Talk:Bipartisan Cafe/GA1

GA Review

Passed. voorts (talk/contributions) 02:35, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Voorts (talk · contribs) 22:02, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

~~Review to come.~~

@Another Believer: Excellent work. Just a few comments:

Refs 55 looks like it's for the wrong restaurant.
- Fixed. Good catch! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 01:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The history section should be reorganized chronologically and the subsections removed.
- I've tried to address your concern. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 01:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think the section on Emerson's views should be removed and relevant in-scope information about how his views interact with the running of the restaurant should be folded into the history section. As written, the section is undue (15% of the article text per WP:PROSESIZE). If Emerson himself is notable, he should get his own article where his views can be described.
- I've tried to address your concern. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 01:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I also don't think there's a great reason to separate out newspapers from other RSes that have reviewed the restaurant in the reception section. Although not necessary for GA, I think that section can also be reorganized a bit (perhaps thematically), and some of the block quotes can be paraphrased down.
- I've tried to address your concern. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 01:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Not necessary for GA, but I fixed a bunch of refs during my edit. Make sure you're including author names and following MOS:CONFORMTITLE.

Thanks, voorts (talk/contributions) 23:34, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 01:41, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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