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Date	Process	Result
December 15, 2020	Featured article candidate	Not promoted
January 23, 2021	Guild of Copy Editors	Copyedited
January 28, 2021	Peer review	Not reviewed
February 1, 2021	Good article nominee	Listed
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 1, 2021. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Indonesian drama film Ave Maryam focuses on a forbidden romantic relationship between a Roman Catholic nun and her pastor?
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:42, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that while she was sick, the husband of Maudy Koesnaedi, the lead cast of Ave Maryam, permitted her to join the film project "if it could cure her sickness"?~~Source: https://wartakota.tribunnews.com/amp/2019/04/04/sebelum-syuting-ave-maryam-dilakukan-maudy-koesnadi-sempat-menolak-peran-suster-maryam
- ALT1:... that Ave Maryam, set in 1980, features a G-Shock watch that was sold three years after?Source: https://ulasinema.com/review-film-ave-maryam-2018-visual-cantik-perlu-disidik/
- ALT2:... that the main characters of Ave Maryam, a religious sister and a pastor, were compared with Adam and Eve?Source: https://www.easternkicks.com/reviews/ave-maryam

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Regent of Thousand Islands

Improved to Good Article status by Gerald Waldo Luis (talk). Self-nominated at 02:37, 1 February 2021 (UTC).[reply]

GA article, long enough, QPQ done. Passes earwig. Surprised this is GA as the prose is somewhat clunky. Not thrilled with any of the hooks, though I think a hook based on a catholic film in a Muslim country has promise. --evrik ^(talk) 03:12, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

evrik, maybe:

ALT3:... that the cast for the religious sister in Ave Maryam is in reality a Muslim? (Indonesia is a predominantly Muslim country and not Muslim country, so calling it one would be a misrepresentation.) Gerald WL 04:20, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Proposing a new hook --evrik ^(talk) 06:04, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

ALT4:... that the Indonesian ~~romantic~~ drama film Ave Maryam focuses on the forbidden romantic relationship between a Roman Catholic nun and her pastor?

Approving ALT4, and otherwise relying on evrik's review. I don't think we need the word "romantic" twice in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:44, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Her religion

Maryam, a 40-year-old woman from a Muslim family, is working as a religious sister in an orphanage,

If you mean that her family is Muslim and she is Catholic, it is not clear in this phrasing. --Error (talk) 10:51, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Error, there must be some confusion. I've altered it up. Gerald WL 13:31, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis: I still don't understand if she has converted to Catholicism or not. --Error (talk) 14:39, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Error, she did, but the process is not seen. Basically, at the point of accepting the sister job she is already a Catholic, as it's the first time audience sees her as one. Gerald WL 14:46, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis: I tried to make it clearer. --Error (talk) 14:56, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]