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A fact from Antonio Dini appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 10 July 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Antonio Dini was the only survivor of a three-man crew after he crashed a plane into the sea, but had no recollection of the crash due to concussion?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/July. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Antonio Dini.

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B class review[edit]

Confirm B class assessment which was done by a bot. Djmaschek (talk) 03:38, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Edge3 (talk) 00:40, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Antonio Dini was the only survivor of a three man crew after he crashed a plane into the sea, but because he was concussed he had no recollection of the crash? Source: Martyn, Errol (2008). For Your Tomorrow – A Record of New Zealanders Who Have Died While Serving with the RNZAF and Allied Air Services Since 1915 – Volume Three: Biographies & Appendices. Christchurch: Volplane Press. ISBN 978-0-473-12829-6. Page 165 , https://paperspast.natlib.govt.nz/newspapers/NZH19390610.2.74 , https://paperspast.natlib.govt.nz/newspapers/NZH19390826.2.213.22
- ALT1: ... that Antonio Dini died after his plane crashed near Folkestone soon after taking off? Source: Lambert, Max (2011). Day After Day: New Zealanders in Fighter Command. Auckland: HarperCollins Publishers. ISBN 978-1-86950-844-9. Page 58 , Rawlings, John (1976). Fighter Squadrons of the RAF and their Aircraft. London: MacDonald & James. ISBN 0-354-01028-X. Page 486-487
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sarah Mardini

Improved to Good Article status by Zawed (talk) and Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 17:47, 5 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Antonio Dini; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

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... that Antonio Dini was the only survivor of a three man crew after he crashed a plane into the sea, but had no recollection of the crash due to concussion? Seddon ^talk 01:15, 21 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Seddon: since this nom has been hanging for a month and a half on wording, I'm just gonna let this go through, if that's all right with you. Hooks often get tightened up post-promotion anyway. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 18:35, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]