Talk:Antimonumento 5J/GA1
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Nominator: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 21:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Tbhotch Here are my comments. :) Arconning (talk) 13:08, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
[edit]Lead and infobox
[edit]- protests of 4, 5, The artwork was installed on 5 June 2023, authorities removed the sculpture, add a comma at the end.
- monument be reinstalled,, add to after monument.
- Optional. Citation in the lead is alright but if you could mention it in the body and remove the citation in the lead, that would be alright.
- Removed. It was for the DYK.
Background
[edit]- Giovanni died of head trauma from a blunt object, , remove comma.
- Mex$, US$, link to the denominations.
- Somebody once told me that money would fall into WP:OVERLINK
- According to the family, they refused the payment,, After Floyd's murder,, remove comma.
- The video became viral,, change became to went, and remove the comma.
- who were reported as forcibly disappeared., replace as to to have.
- "El Halconazo" , add a comma at the end.
History and installation
[edit]- on the opposite side of the State Government Palace, add a comma at the end.
- another anti-monument, add was at the end.
- Giovanni's case was not isolated and, add that at the end.
- the lights in the plaza were turned off, add a comma at the end.
Replica and ordered reinstallation
[edit]- for installation was submitted , add a comma at the end.
- consult with the state civil protection, remove the.
- Firefighters rejected the reinstallation, add a comma at the end.
- and that (being made of steel) it could cause electric problems,, remove comma.
- is one meter shorter, convert to imperial system as well.
Images
[edit]- All have proper licenses, just be careful on the second to last one.
Refs
[edit]- Random reference check: 1, 8, 15, 19, 27, good!
- Earwig and manual check seems great.
Misc
[edit]- No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information about the background of the topic and the topic itself, neutral.
- @Arconning: Thanks for the review, I have completed most of the concerns. (CC) Tbhotch™ 18:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Tbhotch You should mention in the body that the monument was built due to his death and the protests relating to his death. I believe that's my last comment, and we'll be set! Arconning (talk) 04:21, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Thanks for reviewing, Arconning. For the record, I support the promotion of this article, assuming all of your concerns are addressed appropriately. Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:35, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Added, and thanks. (CC) Tbhotch™ 02:34, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
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