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Reviewer: --Legolas (talk2me) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
I will be reviewing the song article against GA criteria. --Legolas (talk2me) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- See below
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- See below
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- See below
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
OK. The prose and MOS issues are the main concerns. Here are they.
- Lead
Done
- "Anticipating" is a song by American recording artist Britney Spears from her third studio album Britney. --> There should be a comma after Spears.
- written by Spears and produced --> "while" in place of "and"
- Madonna and Rick Astley needs to be wikilinked.
- comma after 2002.
- Avoid continuous repetition of the phrase "The song".
- Background
Done
- and produced by --> ", while produced by"
- The song was mixed at the latter studio by Stephen George --> Rephrase
- the song is written in the key of F major --> So wrong. A song can't be written in a key of music. It is composed in a key.
- Reception
Done
- No need to two subsections as the chart performance consists of just one line. Combine them into a single section.
- Live performance
- The performance began a video interlude --> 'with a video interlude
- appeared onstage --> comma after onstage
- Tracklising
Done
- Unsourced
- en-dash is upposed to be used
- References
Done
- Online sources like MTV etc are not to be italicized.
- En-dash in place of normal dashes.
- No caps in the title of references.
- External link
Done
- WP:SPAM link. Doesnot contain anything related to the song. --Legolas (talk2me) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
- Image
Done
- File:Anticipating music video.jpg is a blantant violation of WP:NFCC for living person as it is directly from the tour, for which a free replaceable image is easily available.
- There are currently no free replaceable images from the performance. Should i remove the image anyway? Xwomanizerx (talk) 17:35, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
- Yes. If no free image is available at presetn, then remove it. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
- There are currently no free replaceable images from the performance. Should i remove the image anyway? Xwomanizerx (talk) 17:35, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
- I'm keeping the article on hold for seven days to resolve the issues. --Legolas (talk2me) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
- I'm passing this article. --Legolas (talk2me) 05:08, 23 March 2010 (UTC)