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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:08, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Almost there. Some copy tweaks and also some suggestions in re: sourcing. Templates like {{pq}} can come in really handy for heavy ProQuest users. 7-day hold to GamerPro64. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 03:08, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@GamerPro64 I caught one other issue in fixing all the newspaper clippings. The Steve Hall review was not from the Indianapolis Star but its sister daily, the Indianapolis News. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 05:36, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

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Sourcing and spot checks

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Earwig turns up no issues (top number is a content mill mirroring us).

  • 5 (OC Register → New York Daily News): "More exciting than daunting" quote is included. checkY
  • 6 (USA Today): Producers shot a version of the episode Wednesday as a fallback, in case of technical difficulties tonight, but the live show is expected to go smoothly. checkY
  • 8: Viewership figure in LAT national Nielsen ratings feature is correct. checkY
  • 15: Gold Derby list ranks the episode 12th. checkY
  • 17: List of Emmy nominations. checkY

Images

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This page has no images. I see one tangential one was culled during peer review.

Encouragements

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Not required for GA specifications, but good best practices.

  • Clip newspapers.com citations and use that as the URL. Some multipage articles require multiple clippings.
  • Use ProQuest document IDs. You do this by adding to the |id= parameter of the relevant citation the document number corresponding to each resource, which is in the URL, wrapped in {{ProQuest}} or its shortcut {{pq}}. For instance, the USA Today reference has an ID of 408734998, so you would put {{ProQuest|408734998}}.
    • To make it easier, here are the other two.
      • Orange County Register: 273015476. This is actually a reprint from the New York Daily News the day before.[1]
      • Boston Globe: 403882861
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  1. ^ Huff, Richard (September 22, 1997). "Prepping for a tricky operation: A live 'ER'". Daily News. New York. p. 65. Retrieved January 23, 2023 – via Newspapers.com.