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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:13, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:


Comments

  • the New Guinea theatre I don't like this term. The theatre was SWPA.
    • Fair enough, I was looking to work the New Guinea campaign link in, but I guess we could just say "New Guinea area"...
  • based in New Guinea Any idea where his headquarters actually was?
    • Odgers reports it as Madang in mid-1944 and then never refers to the HQ's location again. Given its whole point was as a static area command, I guess we can assume it was still there during Walters' term as AOC, which started six months later.

Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:23, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tks for reviewing, Hawkeye. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 02:02, 25 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]