Draft:Patrick Amofah
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Comment: As this article covers WP:BLP, I'd want to see inline citations for every statements. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 07:11, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Still an advert, but thank you for the changes."Patrick Amofah[1][2][3][4][5] " is a prime example of WP:CITEKILL. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. Three is not a target, it's a limit. Aim for one. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:45, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: You have created a portmanteau of three articles in one.The person is WP:ROTM and fails WP:BIOHour-Hand Watch Co is WP:ROTM and fails WP:NCORPWarrior King is WP:ROTM and fails WP:NCORPTaken together, these three themes, or any one of them taken alone, are an advertisement 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:22, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
Patrick Amofah [1][2][3] (born 10th September, 1993 in Tema) is a Ghanaian[4] horologist[5][6], who is the founder of Warrior King Watches[7][8]. He is also known for founding HourHand Watch Co, a watch brand that integrates elements of Ghanaian culture and craftsmanship.
Career
[edit]In 2020, Amofah established HourHand Watch Co.[9] as an online business specializing in watch restoration and repair, later expanding to a physical location in Greda Estate, Ghana, to meet growing demand. HourHand[10] offers various services, such as battery replacement, case refinishing, and the restoration of vintage timepieces.
Amofah subsequently launched Warrior King, a watch brand that incorporates themes from Ghanaian heritage[11]. The name "Warrior King"[12] references the meaning of "Ghana" and aims to reflect elements of Ghanaian cultural identity within its designs.
References
[edit]- ^ Arthur, Portia (2024-08-10). "Patrick Amofah: Meet the GH man crafting luxury watches loved by Otumfour". Yen.com.gh - Ghana news. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ "Ghanaian watchmaker, Patrick Amofah services $600k Richard Mille McLaren watches and other high-end watches". 2023-03-15. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ Arthur, Portia (2023-04-21). "Man earns $600k deal with watch firm he started because Circle boys cheated him". Yen.com.gh - Ghana news. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ "Ghanaian Watchmaker Patrick Amofah crafts time, heritage, and style through Warrior King Watches". www.gq.co.za. Retrieved 2024-11-15.
- ^ Tollo, Nathan (2023-11-17). "How this Ghanaian watchmaker is redefining luxury watchmaking in Africa with Warrior King Watches". Face2Face Africa. Retrieved 2024-11-15.
- ^ "How my father's faulty watch led me to start my own company – Entrepreneur shares story - MyJoyOnline". www.myjoyonline.com. 2022-11-02. Retrieved 2024-11-15.
- ^ Starrfm.com.gh (2024-10-11). "Warrior King Watches becomes official time partner of Africa Basketball Festival". Starr Fm. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ Etefe, Juliet (2023-09-11). "Warrior King watches elevating rich heritage worldwide". The Business & Financial Times. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ "Hourhand Watch co. CEO presents 18K gold Warrior King timepiece to Asantehene". 2023-07-07. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ "Hourhand Watch Company invents strategies to help watch lovers keep their timepieces forever". 2022-10-27. Retrieved 2024-11-14.
- ^ "Ghanaian Watchmaker Patrick Amofah crafts time, heritage, and style through Warrior King Watches". www.gq.co.za. Retrieved 2024-11-15.
- ^ Etefe, Juliet (2023-03-16). "Watchmaker Patrick Amofah services US$600,000 Richard Mille, other high-end watches". The Business & Financial Times. Retrieved 2024-11-14.