Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/August 11, 2016

Two things:

1.

(...) assumes the role of a starship soldier trying to stem the outbreak of a genetic infection that has devastated the ship.

"Starship soldier" sounds a bit odd to me.

"Soldier on a starship"

sounds better, or "

assumes the role of a soldier trying to stem the outbreak of a genetic infection that has devastated a starship.

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2. I think BioShock deserves a mention. It is mention in the lead of System Shock 2; see also BioShock#Game_design. soetermans. ^{↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK} 07:46, 30 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm in the hospital but the docotr says I may be going home today. It might take me a few days to get to this. Thanks. - Dank (push to talk) 12:09, 30 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, add the language you want and I'll look at it. - Dank (push to talk) 17:15, 30 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]