Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates/2008 World Series of Poker Europe results/archive1

References

Which citation templates are being used? There is an inconsistency with how the fields are presented, like the dates.
Error with the citation template in ref #9.
- I don't see it now, it must have been fixed since Feb.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Consistency with the publisher of Poker Listing: is it Poker Listings? or Poker Listing?
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Ref #5 is missing a publisher, in addition to being dead.--TRUCO ⁵⁰³ 02:15, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Don't see it now, must have been fixed since Feb.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comment- The word "results" in the article name should be lower case. I don't know if moving it during this process will break anything so I won't. Otto4711 (talk) 22:21, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed prior to April.---I'm Spartacus! ^{NO! I'm Spartacus!} 01:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

"outside of the United States"
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"Since 1970 if one wanted to compete in the World Series of Poker, one had to travel to Las Vegas."-->Since 1970, participants have had to travel to Las Vegas if they wanted to compete in the World Series of Poker (WSOP).
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"While the WSOP held circuit events in other locations, the main tournaments, which awarded bracelets to the winners were exclusively held in Vegas."-->Although the WSOP held circuit events in other locations, the main tournaments, which awarded bracelets to the winners, were exclusively held in Las Vegas.
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"awarded outside of Las Vegas"
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"in the London area - Fifty, Leicester Square" Should be en em dash (—).
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"U.S.." Double periods.
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"did not relying upon its reputation alone" Wrong tense.
- Not sure about this one, how would you propose rewording it?
"On July 5, 2007 Harrah's" Comma after "2007".
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"Harrah's announced an alliance"-->Harrah's announced its alliance
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"is intended to play on Betfair's European reputation" "play on"-->build on or take advantage of.
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"In 2007, U.S. laws prevented the WSOP from accepting" Confusing, were the laws passed in 2007?
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"youngest player ~~to ever~~ to win a"
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"Leicester Square, London" Don't link common geographical terms such as "London".
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"Three time bracelet winner " Hyphenate "Three time".
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"The 2008 WSOPE was particularly notable as Jesper Hougaard became the first person to ever win a bracele"-->The 2008 WSOPE was particularly notable, as Jesper Hougaard became the first person to win a bracelet
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"Ivan Demidov made news as he was one of the November"-->Ivan Demidov was one of the November
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Captions that are not complete sentences should have periods at the end.
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Link seven-card stud. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:06, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Sources

Ref 5, the "BluffMagazine.com. Bluff Magazine" is not necessary; just put "Bluff Magazine".
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