Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Pneumothorax/archive1

My task list:

Axl's comments:
- ~~All unanswered points~~
- ~~Balance BHD content~~
- Replace chest drain image
~~Anon's comments: Introduce the concept of "bilateral pneumothoraces" - requires a secondary source~~
- Covered in "prevention"
RexxS comments
- ~~Review introduction based on comments~~
- Include diving-related content as suggested on the talkpage
Snowmanradio's comments
- ~~Review the need for references in the intro~~ (leaving this alone)
- ~~Find sources for a veterinary section, if suitable~~ - awaiting response on this paper
- ~~A bit more context about flying (currently in the beginning of "Treatment")~~
- ~~Find a source for "pyopneumothorax" and "hydropneumothorax"~~ (not found anything on pyopneumothorax, which seems to be more of a concern when discussing empyema)