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[edit]- 1 Not on the page given.
- I assume you mean Fouruzani 2014, which an encyclopedic entry, therefore doesn't have a page
- No, I meant Bosworth 1998. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I assume you mean Fouruzani 2014, which an encyclopedic entry, therefore doesn't have a page
- Is Kalji (source) the same as Kaliji (our article)? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 11:05, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes
- Is Kalji (source) the same as Kaliji (our article)? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 11:05, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- 3 OK
- 4 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/15Ezp91xnaGkukHaZCFDkNQSSgYGBLmm3/view?usp=drive_link
- OK, although you may want to move the reference into the parens, as otherwise it reads like the source supports "She used two nisbas" too (which it doesn't) Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done
- OK, although you may want to move the reference into the parens, as otherwise it reads like the source supports "She used two nisbas" too (which it doesn't) Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/15Ezp91xnaGkukHaZCFDkNQSSgYGBLmm3/view?usp=drive_link
- 5 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zDyuepOEU8mndWVOAlJDDoS6j79t-nPi/view?usp=drive_link
- OK, and thanks for highlighting the text too. Makes it much easier to verify. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zDyuepOEU8mndWVOAlJDDoS6j79t-nPi/view?usp=drive_link
- 6 OK
Removed
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MR5dEtZta4R8XW3Ef7tgHyymH9t1qGVd/view?usp=drive_link- "Weak" and "which was dependent on the powerful leadership of the sultan." isn't in the screenshot you gave me. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- They're on the previous page/link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1js8unUOBSPCK6eS6MTQ7QjVWxuSBZU1V/view. Amir Ghandi (talk) Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- OK, although "weak" is a bit interpretative. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Changed to inept
- OK, although "weak" is a bit interpretative. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- They're on the previous page/link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1js8unUOBSPCK6eS6MTQ7QjVWxuSBZU1V/view. Amir Ghandi (talk) Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- "Weak" and "which was dependent on the powerful leadership of the sultan." isn't in the screenshot you gave me. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P62vo04fT--BBSZRlzT0D31ANVMYNMkw/view?usp=drive_link
- Seems like that photo cut off part of the quote. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here the rest of the quote: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cSJk5ukGOiVLt1QhXAklVgeSAy1PRUo2/view?usp=drive_link
- Source only mentions one letter. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here the rest of the quote: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cSJk5ukGOiVLt1QhXAklVgeSAy1PRUo2/view?usp=drive_link
- Seems like that photo cut off part of the quote. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- 26 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FpazeZU0vSVAKj2yNseeWVZUctuhQxkp/view?usp=drive_link
- This needs a slight rewrite, as "political influence" and "succession" aren't equivalent. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done
- This needs a slight rewrite, as "political influence" and "succession" aren't equivalent. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FpazeZU0vSVAKj2yNseeWVZUctuhQxkp/view?usp=drive_link
- 31 OK
- 34 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HMsiShX4eEmptvL30d-dNN4JXEL7YiLe/view?usp=drive_link
- Apparently not everybody agrees that Muhammad was executed too? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Deleted 'executed'.
- Apparently not everybody agrees that Muhammad was executed too? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HMsiShX4eEmptvL30d-dNN4JXEL7YiLe/view?usp=drive_link
- 37 Not getting "Bayhaqi and his successors all respected her," from these pages at all?
- Changed the source pages
- Probably need a quote or so here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jo-Jo Eumerus I went back and reviewed the pages and decided to delete the line. Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:54, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Probably need a quote or so here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Changed the source pages