Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Bionic Commando Rearmed
Seeking a general copy edit review as well as general input on this downloadable title. I've never done an article on a XBLA/PSN game, and I'd like to make this one a standard for how they're done. Additionally, if you stumble across any sources, feel free to just paste em' here and I'll add them using cite web. --Teancum (talk) 15:59, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
- Comments by David Fuchs
Sorry it took so long to get to this. Anyhow, some comments:
- The lead should mention some development info, beyond who developed it, methinks.
- The article is in need of a copyedit by someone who doesn't play video games. I can see how people could get lost in the gameplay section. I think giving an overview that you try to complete levels using weaponry, defeating enemies, and the grapple might be the best way to start.
- File:BionicCommandoRearmed ss.jpg is too large for WP:NFCC; finding a non-watermarked version might be the best bet.
- Don't need File:BCR-soundtrack-cover.jpg, and probably not the infobox either since it should all be in prose anyhow.
- Where is the reference for the paragraph starting with "...Spencer earns a variety of weaponry by defeating level bosses."
- The reception section really could be beefed up, and organized into reviewer's comments about graphics, sound, overall impressions, etc. I'll see what I've got in the way of print sources, but there might be more online ones too. --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 18:30, 11 May 2010 (UTC)
Thanks much for the review. If you do find any print sources I'd be grateful. I'll get started cleaning up the article this weekend. --Teancum (talk) 11:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
- Send me an email, and if I find anything I'll respond with an attachment. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs(talk) 15:51, 12 May 2010 (UTC)