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Review by SpecialWindler

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  • Lacks WP:PERSONDATA
  • Your referencing needs to come imediately after puncuation.[1] Like that, not this. [2] or this[3].
  • The entire "Club football" section is one sentence paragraphs. You should expand.
  • The Place of Birth contridicts itself. It says Wigan in the first line, but Ashton-in-Makerfield, Lancashire in the infobox.
  • The "representative football" section is also one sentence paragraphs.
  • The Source No.1 says nothing about being compared to Wade McKinnon, is this original research?
  • You should add more info on his career before league.
  • You use the term "football" alot in the article, mainly in headings. Seeing your in England, where football is known as soccer, rugby league may be a better term to use. Though this is not a major problem.
  • You use Source 1 & 8 are the same consider the following
    • <ref name="1">Whatever</ref>
Then you only have to go like this, for the second/third so on time you use that reference.
    • <ref name="1"/>
  • You shouldn't use news articles in the External links section. They don't provide readers with too much extra stuff, the player profiles are good.
  • You mess the way the article is wrote, In the "Club football" section it has a bit about 2007, then something about a serious knee injury in 2004. You should have those things in chronoligical order.
  • Category's should be in alphebetical order, (numbers then letters)
  • Use {{DEFAULTSORT}}, instead of in a category going [[Category:Blah Blah|Melling, Chris]], remove the |Mellung, Chris and above add the template, with {{DEFAULTSORT:Melling, Chirs}}.
  • The image is not free. You'll have to out a capture a pic of him with your own camera, thats the easy way of making a pic free. SpecialWindler talk 22:14, 21 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Basically the whole article needs expanding, to cover every major fact of his life. But a good start. SpecialWindler talk 22:08, 21 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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